We spent 2 days drawing , talking and recording our ideas from the holidays.
We used a planning tool called a mind map. These are in our writing books if you would like to come and have a look at them.
Today we started writing our story. We are focusing on hooking our readers into our work by writing an interesting beginning.
When we made our mind maps we could use felts, crayons, pen, whiteboards and plasticine. We like to have choice in Rm 12.
Ruby would like to say thanks to the kids from Room 12. She received a card from Eva over the holidays showing pictures of the bunnys her family looked after and some of photos of the the girls who had been up to visit them. The kids from room 12 had also written in the card to say
ReplyDelete'hi' and so had Mrs Ojala. Ruby loved getting mail, she wants to say a big 'Hello' back to everyone. She hopes you all had a great holiday and write a great holiday story. Love Ruby xxx
ReplyDeleteHello Ruby
ReplyDeleteSo nice to hear from you. How are you?? How is your new school. We would love to hear from you. We miss you.
Mrs Ojala